Storyline and narrative
My Story is quite simple its an ordinary boy that goes to high school and he gets picked on.The thing that makes my story more interesting is the way people are seen. Everybody is seen as 3 dimensional shapes and the 'cube's' are considered inferior meaning everyone picks on the 'cube's'.
Through out my story the cube which is the main character (Ruben) has to over come some quite big problems the main problem being a square based pyramid that happens to be one of his worst bully's.
Story main points
. Main character get bullied at school
. Main character needs help to stop the
bulling.
. Main character seeks help. (He contacts
his brother)
. His brother escapes from jail to help him
. Brother starts training him.
. Brother gets caught by police and has to
go back to jail.
. Main character has to go alone.
. Main character defeats the bullies.
. Main character lives happily ever after.
It was prank calls that started it, the telephone
ringing three times in the dead of night, and the voice on the other end making
stupid remarks about my shape.
Born into a family of cubes was never considered a
good thing and in my case this was no exception. Good for nothing apart from
taking hits I thought to my self as my body hits the sports hall floor the next day at sports class. Blood
sweat and tears they told me I laughed to my self at the idea that I once
thought that was just a saying.
Suddenly two big sweaty hands grabbed me by the collar
dragging me to my feet. Unaware it was my gym teacher and still in shock from
getting knocked over a few minutes ago I swung my arm connecting with the
pyramid most people would show a lot of respect for. Gasps made I ran out of
the gym pushing through the double doors and in-between the two students on the
other side. Leaving behind a trail of tears I left the school grounds and walk
home as slowly as possible all the time trying to think of excuses to how I got
the grazes on my face. when I finaly got home I ran up the stairs pushing past my mother trying not to make eye contact and slamming the door of my bed room behind me. Jumping face first into my bed I made a grunt as I made impact and fell strait asleep.
This is what is going to be said if you choice the option pushed over
PE
(Pushed over)
Bully1: Ha what the fuck are you doing down there.
Cube: You pushed me you idiot I would have thought that much
was obvious. (While getting up)
Bully1: Don’t get cheeky with me ya little inconspicuous loser.
Cube: Of course not your fucking majesty.
Bully1: What do you mean of course not I wasn’t asking I was
telling!
Cube: (anger building)
Bully2: Why is your skin leaking?
Bully3: A: Because
im worried. B: Im not its
just hot in here
Option A
Bully2: Worried about what?
Bully3: Because you brainless idiot for every action there
is a reaction
Bully2: so…
Bully3: Have you never seen a cubes reaction?
Bully2: nope…
Bully3: well it’s quite a fucking thing much like the
northern lights it’s very rare sight but when it happens its magical.
Bully2: well if there was every going to be a reaction now’s
the time…. He looks kinda mad.
Option B
Bully3: Hot! Its not hot it’s the middle of the fucking
winter
Bully2: Yeah but unlike you I have been moving this class
you fat sack of pigs hit.
Bully3: Shut up…… It’s not fat its puppy fat.
Bully2: But fat non-the less… Idiot
Bully1: Look at you, you look a fucking state.
Cube: Ha call me what every you want I don’t care anymore.
In fact you could call me fucking jenny for all I care.
Bully1: What have I told you about being cheeky (pushing him
to the ground again)
Here is a short flow chart showing the different options you can take throughout the story. It also shows the out come you will get if you pick the different some of options
Here is some of the game narrative if you choose the option Pushed over while progressing through out the game.
Here is a tension chart showing the change in tenstion throughout the story.
No comments:
Post a Comment